Danny
Ms. Lehmann
English 1-1A
27 \February \2020
Summer
It was dark and silent until me and my family heard the sound of metal hitting with a *cling and clang*then all of a sudden, some human like creature emerged from the corner or a broken-down building.
One day in October it was a cold afternoon when I came from school that day I asked, my parents if we could go to Albion, they said sure because they were already going to go after some hours of convincing one of my brothers to go the other one could not go because he was to small at the time but, when I convinced my brother to go on the way he regretted it he got to nervous.
As soon as we had gotten to the entrance it looked haunted because the trees had no leaves and the sound of the chainsaw first, we had gone to the zombie building the one right next to the entrance my family was really excited to go in but, not my brother as soon as we got in there was little to no light there was shrieks of pain and something in the distance as we moved closer my dad said “let me go first” because I had been first for a little while and then we heard some familiar voices so we went in more and we met my aunt and her boyfriend I said “ Why are you guys scared” my aunt said “ cause its creepy in here” then they went with us every step we had taken the sound got louder
It was dark and silent until me and my family heard the sound of metal hitting with a *cling and clang*then all of a sudden, some human like creature emerged from the corner or a broken-down building. Then I waved at the person dressed as a zombie as we left that area.
My brother” why did you convince me to come with you guys?” I said” because it is fun” we got to the movie part in the zombie building there was zombie walking around one dressed in a wedding dress they grunted and shrieked as we pasted them. It was cold and the wind was blowing as soon as we got outside, we were deciding which one to go to so we chose the monster building my dad said “this one is the least scary” to my brother I said “its going to be like the ride in lagoon.” so then we walked in there and it looked exactly like the ride in lagoon there was fake spider webs everywhere a werewolf that made really loud noises in the entrance the further along we went the more things there were like in the next room there was big fake spiders witches and a noise of a guy screaming in pain my mom said “Look at the witch moving her pot” we all looked and the witch was moving it turned out to be someone in a costume they waved at us passing by in the next room there was fake blood everywhere and a person popped out on us when we first entered the room the person was dressed up as a demon the room looked very dark and there was a lot of noise everywhere noises of laughing witches and the people behind us getting surprised as the guy in the costume jumps out on them my aunt said “ that was scary when the guy popped out on us” my brother said “ yeah it scared me bad” then we went on and after looking around the room for 5 mins we left outside and we saw a broken down bus and there was a guy chasing us with a chainsaw the noise of the chainsaw was loud I have never ran faster then I did in that moment after that we saw the time and it was 1 o’clock and we went home.
Ms. Lehmann
English 1-1A
27 \February \2020
Summer
It was dark and silent until me and my family heard the sound of metal hitting with a *cling and clang*then all of a sudden, some human like creature emerged from the corner or a broken-down building.
One day in October it was a cold afternoon when I came from school that day I asked, my parents if we could go to Albion, they said sure because they were already going to go after some hours of convincing one of my brothers to go the other one could not go because he was to small at the time but, when I convinced my brother to go on the way he regretted it he got to nervous.
As soon as we had gotten to the entrance it looked haunted because the trees had no leaves and the sound of the chainsaw first, we had gone to the zombie building the one right next to the entrance my family was really excited to go in but, not my brother as soon as we got in there was little to no light there was shrieks of pain and something in the distance as we moved closer my dad said “let me go first” because I had been first for a little while and then we heard some familiar voices so we went in more and we met my aunt and her boyfriend I said “ Why are you guys scared” my aunt said “ cause its creepy in here” then they went with us every step we had taken the sound got louder
It was dark and silent until me and my family heard the sound of metal hitting with a *cling and clang*then all of a sudden, some human like creature emerged from the corner or a broken-down building. Then I waved at the person dressed as a zombie as we left that area.
My brother” why did you convince me to come with you guys?” I said” because it is fun” we got to the movie part in the zombie building there was zombie walking around one dressed in a wedding dress they grunted and shrieked as we pasted them. It was cold and the wind was blowing as soon as we got outside, we were deciding which one to go to so we chose the monster building my dad said “this one is the least scary” to my brother I said “its going to be like the ride in lagoon.” so then we walked in there and it looked exactly like the ride in lagoon there was fake spider webs everywhere a werewolf that made really loud noises in the entrance the further along we went the more things there were like in the next room there was big fake spiders witches and a noise of a guy screaming in pain my mom said “Look at the witch moving her pot” we all looked and the witch was moving it turned out to be someone in a costume they waved at us passing by in the next room there was fake blood everywhere and a person popped out on us when we first entered the room the person was dressed up as a demon the room looked very dark and there was a lot of noise everywhere noises of laughing witches and the people behind us getting surprised as the guy in the costume jumps out on them my aunt said “ that was scary when the guy popped out on us” my brother said “ yeah it scared me bad” then we went on and after looking around the room for 5 mins we left outside and we saw a broken down bus and there was a guy chasing us with a chainsaw the noise of the chainsaw was loud I have never ran faster then I did in that moment after that we saw the time and it was 1 o’clock and we went home.